My hand embrace my pen,
holding it tightly than it was suppose to be.
Painting into a unscribbled paper,
hoping that something would be done with it.
The white parchment remained untainted,
though my heart scream for something to imprint,
but if I did, would you read?
Would it trigger you -to laugh or cry?
Or would you sue it off,
throw the paper and step on it?
Author notes
is this, in anyway fit your prompt? damn, hope this one is good for the contest, worthy I mean...
-topic: a writer's hesitation, fears and despair, when he/she felt that she can't be commended o something she wrote...
A contest entry
- Message of the Day Quickie 3 by lowercase prelude.
1000 points, ended August 9, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Make me Cry. ... One way or another
Comments
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The white parchment remained untainted,
though my heart scream for something to imprint,
very descriptive in these lines
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very good word usage and imagery
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