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Everyday

I walk by you everyday,
Smiling sweetly, saying hi.
Each step I take my heart breakes,
Hurt gose unknown.
Behind this mask is a little girl,
Sad and alone,
Who pretents nothing's wrong. 

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  • esimbf
    July 16
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    This is a really good poem I can feel the emotion in it.


  • BloodySounds--
    August 8, 2008
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    spellcheck


  • Missa
    August 8, 2008
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    "Hurt gose unknown" i think you ment "goes".

    anyway, great write!