one key, three key chains
always carry you with me
you open no doors
A contest entry
- Haiku and Bless You! by azure85.
4500 points, ended August 22, 2008, 57 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is very interesting.
The key to your heart?
A beautiful (short) poem.
lovely write.
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How interesting.
I like this. The title is lovely.
The haiku is unique. I really do.
It's ironic, though, in my eyes. Since it seems you're saying "I love you. Except...you do not help me. You keep the door shut on my life."
I like it. And congrats on the honorable mention.
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yaaay you got an hm!!
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I think its funny how no one gets it.
Woo i like it!
-from your biggest fan
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Badass!
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yay
you are really oing to do it huh?
hahahahah
♥
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one key, three key chains
always carry you with me
you open no doors
Very good AHA moment in L3, you wonder what the keys are for. Thank you so much!
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Interesting ^^
I'm sitting here still working it out but nopes, guess I'll still have to ponder!!
Nicely penned
Good luck with your entry!
Claire x -
ooh haikus
im no good at writing short poetry
so in that you're way better than me
lmfao we have to stop comparing eachother
best of luck in that contest.. i might try writing a haiku later on but itll turn out crappy -
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how about we are both good
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hahahah
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very gooooddddd.
wow, this is what's hard for me.
condensing feelings into a few short lines.
it just leaves someone to figure out the rest.
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oOoOoOoooo this is quite good for only 3 lines.
theres a random hug for you haha
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I like the last line best.
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