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Keeping Me..

I want to be loved.
By a beauty that knows how to touch.
Wanting to be first, in her thinking lust.
Liking for play, then thinking of games to play.
Wanting to be inside her soul.
Being together with fleshly moans.
Loving to touch and rub that silky skin.
If they do it to me.. This man will be staying around with a grin.

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What you Think...???? Your friend in Poetry... JackReed3

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  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    February 15

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    I think it's absolutely perfect. Not sure if this is how you meant it but I took it as a give and get situation...not just taking. Either way it's a terrific write!

  • blaq roze
    August 20, 2008
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    good job