Julia

Im not one to put myself out there.
But you seem worth it.
Im not one to deal with.
The matters of the heart.
But I think your worth it.
My hearts been battered.
Ripped.
Scarred.
Broken.
And I need a band aid.
Wanna take care of me?
A little bit of.
Alcohol.
Gauzes.
Love.
That sort of thing.
What im proposing.
Is that you give me a chance...

Im warning you in advance.
People tend to love me.

What are your first thoughts.

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By me, right now

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Lonely Christina
October 17, 2008

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this is cute! love this whole part "My hearts been battered.
Ripped.
Scarred.
Broken.
And I need a band aid.
Wanna take care of me?
A little bit of.
Alcohol.
Gauzes.
Love." hehe reminds me of my work! good job sweetie
xoxo- christina
ULikeDont i
August 18, 2008
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ok tye i'm just commenting to comment......i like the last to lines tho......
PoetryDove
August 7, 2008
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My first thoughts...
This was a happy poem
Which I like.

It's hopeful. People have broken your heart, trashed it, and all of those awful things, but there's someone who can fix that, and that's great.

Loved it.
Sincerely,
momma' podo ~