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hanging up.

im hanging up on you
im disconnecting this line

its my time to shine
no longer will i have to cry

im going to say good-bye
and this time for good

you never understood
im hanging up the phone

you are not in my zone
now im going to sit on my throne

no longer will you take over my life
im putting my foot down

im not going to look like a clown
im starting over

 

im going to grab my four leaf clover

and hope for the best

Author notes

wow i think this is SOO BAD!

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  • aanika
    August 11, 2008

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    no longer will you take over my life
    im putting my foot down

    awww it's not that bad
    don't put yourself down so muchhhh.

  • She Stole My Voice
    August 9, 2008
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    Hmm.
    I really don't like
    "you are not in my zone
    now im going to sit on my throne"
    because it seems to interrupt the flow of the poem.
    Other than that, I like it.
    It's a good write.
    I understand the concept of "hanging up" on a person.
    Thank you for entering and good luck.
    ♥


    ~Princess of Shadows~


  • SilverWolf
    August 8, 2008

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    holy cow
    how can you think that is bad!!
    !!
    that is spectatular!!! i really love that.
    "im hanging up the phone"
    wow!!! i love it!
    how can u think its bad???
    its excellent!!
    BRAVO!! BRAVO!! well done!!!!


    Muuah