What's the use?
What's the use of getting up
to face another day?
My life is merely an existence,
since you went away.
What's the use of living
if my life's an empty shell?
I wear a smile as a facade
to hide the pain I know so well.
Why should I plan ahead
as other people do?
What's the purpose of a future
if it can't be shared with you?
I loved you so completely,
but sadly, I have learned;
What's the use of loving
if the love is not returned?
Author notes
A contest entry for:
I Wanna Feel Your Pain
by slippingofftheedge
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- I Wanna Feel Your Pain by slippingofftheedge.
300 points, ended August 15, 2008, 32 entries
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Comments
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You surely nailed this one my friend!!!!!!!
The imagery is awesome and of coures the rest of it is perfect as well. Good luck in the contest.

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I am in the exact same boat right now
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*Applauds you*, this is excellent. A write so many can relate to. Well done my friend. Best of luck.
Linda





