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"What's the Use"

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What's the use?

What's the use of getting up
to face another day?
My life is merely an existence,
since you went away.

What's the use of living
if my life's an empty shell?
I wear a smile as a facade
to hide the pain I know so well.

Why should I plan ahead
as other people do?
What's the purpose of a future
if it can't be shared with you?

I loved you so completely,
but sadly, I have learned;
What's the use of loving
if the love is not returned?

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A contest entry for:
I Wanna Feel Your Pain
by slippingofftheedge

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  • daviscth silver member
    August 8, 2008

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    You surely nailed this one my friend!!!!!!!
    The imagery is awesome and of coures the rest of it is perfect as well. Good luck in the contest.


  • slippingofftheedge
    August 7, 2008
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    I am in the exact same boat right now


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    August 7, 2008

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    *Applauds you*, this is excellent. A write so many can relate to. Well done my friend. Best of luck.
    Linda