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Bite me

Smile your crooked smile baby
I don't think you know who youre dancing with now
  Twighlight falters when the night sets in
    The moon is full, full of lotharen

Whisper in my ear like heat lightning
I never knew you could kiss like this
  Light me on fire, intoxicate me, potential realized
    See me as I am, Terror from the strength within

I tried so hard to break you down
it turned me into stone
I tried so hard to do my best
it left me cold and alone

He likes to be my excuse
The music is my remedy, my heart and soul in sound
  You'd take it away and rip my life out
    The moon is full, you're still in the dark

Feel the throbbing lightning
God is so beautiful in the Heaven that is here
  open your eyes lover mine, is it love or fear
    The stars cannot shine in your love

I tried so hard to break you down
it turned me into stone
I tried so hard to do my best
you left me cold and alone

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  • The Tower
    August 7, 2008
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    applause


  • The Tower
    August 7, 2008

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    ... this is an awesome poem, though i tont think i understand the whole of it. This is clearly a full, complex thought