I love you so much baby
there's no way I'd let you go,
I'd tie you to my hands
if I had no other choice.
Just a brush of your lips
would make me become whole,
that sweet tasting kiss,
that makes me loose control.
Hold me like there's no tommorow,
and confess your devious thoughts of me;
Asure me your love to me is not borrowed,
from something with no guarantee.
I have no prize tag, but baby make me your trophy,
My god baby, make me feel worthy
of the love you articulate about;
Show me what I am without.
Be sure to catch me, because you will always make me fall;
You're my superman, modified into a God;
You take my breath away, but always give it back;
If I were without you my heart would surely loose track.
I'd give anything I could to assure you what I feel,
all the love that I give I make sure it's for real;
I'd spent more time with you, if you weren't so far away,
please baby don't change, don't make distance a pain.
To kiss you is my everyday dream,
and to hold you my desire,
I'd carry my heart out in my sleeve,
if you were the one to really admire.
I've been brave enough to let my feelings out,
and you have gracefully taken me without a shout;
Baby this is the real you,
and that's why I'm only in love with you...
~♥~
Author notes
Tried my best! part of this poem is based on my life but the other half is imaginary 
hope you like~!
XXVampireeyesXX
In a list
A contest entry
- Love II by blaq roze.
1000 points, ended August 20, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Awwwwwwwwwwww by omg-its-sara.
600 points, ended October 8, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Never Again Will This Hurt Me
Comments
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awwwww that's cute!
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good job
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aww this is so cute and sweet and yet secretly dark
the love you expressed here if just so lovely
i love and adore it so so much
all my love
kitty xxx -
I like the way you expressed yourself in this poem. When you have found the right person, he will be very lucky indeed. You have alot of love to give.
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