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In Love With You

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I love you so much baby
there's no way I'd let you go,
I'd tie you to my hands
if I had no other choice.

Just a brush of your lips
would make me become whole,
that sweet tasting kiss,
that makes me loose control.

Hold me like there's no tommorow,
and confess your devious thoughts of me;
Asure me your love to me is not borrowed,
from something with no guarantee.

I have no prize tag, but baby make me your trophy,
My god baby, make me feel worthy
of the love you articulate about;
Show me what I am without.

Be sure to catch me, because you will always make me fall;
You're my superman, modified into a God;
You take my breath away, but always give it back;
If I were without you my heart would surely loose track.

I'd give anything I could to assure you what I feel,
all the love that I give I make sure it's for real;
I'd spent more time with you, if you weren't so far away,
please baby don't change, don't make distance a pain.

To kiss you is my everyday dream,
and to hold you my desire,
I'd carry my heart out in my sleeve,
if you were the one to really admire.

I've been brave enough to let my feelings out,
and you have gracefully taken me without a shout;
Baby this is the real you,
and that's why I'm only in love with you...
~♥~








Author notes

Tried my best! part of this poem is based on my life but the other half is imaginary
hope you like~!
XXVampireeyesXX

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  • omg-its-sara
    October 7, 2008
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    awwwww that's cute!

  • blaq roze
    August 20, 2008
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    good job


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    August 18, 2008

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    aww this is so cute and sweet and yet secretly dark
    the love you expressed here if just so lovely
    i love and adore it so so much
    all my love
    kitty xxx


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    August 17, 2008

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    I like the way you expressed yourself in this poem. When you have found the right person, he will be very lucky indeed. You have alot of love to give.