Checked-in accounts
of lost commited tragedies.
Dwelled inside perpetual agony
I sink in-between scornful delight.
Driven under prosthetic cries,
I perceive this to be riot.
Crossed check-mate love,
I have achieved bioluminescent aid.
Broken distances, removed by fluorescent dyes;
Saved by love's beauty remark.
Dwadling chemical approaches;
slip in through non-destined canals.
Solemn reality awakens me;
I have reached the surface.
Mighty God; conceiving me new heart-
Wisdom responded to interactive commands.
Sorrow devoured; soul replaced;
Phoenix in procedure, enduring what is left.
Incandescent approach- I've reached your almighty strength;
Crossed check-mate love, I have achieved bioluminescent aid.
Author notes
Tried my best.. phew! heavy thinking on this one 
hope you like!
XXVampireeyesXX
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture inspiration by crazymomma.
400 points, ended November 5, 2008, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Never Again Will This Hurt Me
Comments
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Interesting..
hm...to be honest, i have to agree with both the comments below me, haha.
To me, this poem paints a vivid description of the picture prompt, however, it still leaves plenty of room for myself, to add my own images as well
To be honest I'm kinda jealous on how you accomplished this, and yes just as mysteriously, i'm not sure how you did it =)
Best of luck in contest!
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lol thanks I dont know how I did it either but I was really tied to this write because of the reasons you mention and because it defines part of my life.. thank yuo for your comment. it is much appreciated!
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This is a beautiful and deep take on the picture prompt. Nice job on this poem. I like the way you set this write up too. My best to you in the contest. Blessings, Patty
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The direction of this poem is unsure, but that is good, for the reader can take it at his or her discretion. The vocabulary was most remarkable. Very deep, too.
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