Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Second First Kiss

When he kissed me
the very first time
It felt like magic
If only I knew later
Those were the kisses
I would be washing down the drain
Along with all the tears
He made me cry

Now looking back
I can smile
When I realize pain
brings a little gain

My second first kiss
Lasts forever
Each time our lips meet
Magic is still present
Smiles instead of tears
Warm, loving arms
To fall into

My First kiss was
Just bad enough
To taste the sweetness
Of My second first kiss


A contest entry

Please give me your thoughts and/or views

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • PrInCeSs AnAsTaCiA
    August 23, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    sweet.. i love the emotion you have put in here this piece flowed well thanks for entering my contest and best of luck

  • Kelsa B. Davenport
    August 7, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    It was very deep and thought provoking for me. kinda made me look back on my fist kiss and how that ended up.
    I love the imagery you used makes you picture the feeling in your mind as you read.


  • Frodofan silver member
    August 7, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Neat poem. I really love the thought in the last section. You definently grasped the contest theme and I thank you for that.

    Thanks for entering.


  • Angierie
    August 7, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    the last four lines are just adorable!!
    As a whole it's amazing!
    Great write

    Angie