Enjoyed your poem!
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And then the converse of your verse
just when everything is shot,
when darkest days your fate will curse,
find out who your friends are not.
Terry 2008
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Lessons learned.
Would they have been "fairweather friends"?
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I like this verse, particularly since it replies to mine with a strongly stated and valid corollary. Perhaps these friends disappear when fear is stronger than love; one does not wish to think that their love was insincere (though that must be true, at times).
This is concise and well formed, I enjoyed it!
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I think it's the ones that remain or don't
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Enter did not work for me.
That's OK. Like, wat ELSE is new?
At least I tried. -
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lol
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