A sick obsession
with woman in mind.
to harbor this all my life
i have finally snapped.
The features on your face....
the way you eagerly subject to all my wishes.
but now it is to late as your head dangles down.
and in an instant you are not mine any more.
for now you haunt me in my dreams as you have in the flesh.
to come back and torture me like i once did to you.
A contest entry
- Individualized pics #4 by notorious.
2239 points, ended August 19, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
and whispers more than sweet nothings in my ear.
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Think this works for the picture.
"mien" should be "mine" and the last line doesn't read grammatically correct.. the "have" should be removed. Thanks for entering!

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thanks for the grammatical tips. some times my mind gets away with me and my finger tips can't keep up
.it is fixed now.
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obession=>obsession
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Lady Dementia?!!!
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Not our LadyDementia...
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Hahaha but still
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may i have another image please?
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