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Fragile In Those Times

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Fragile in those times
where a dream meets
those in hope
sheltered in memories,
Where the twilight
pursues a heart,
Hunger satiated
in those eyes
whispered in the wind,
Souls touch
moment by moment,
Silver reflections
in the haze of a sunrise,
Feel the breeze
away from the silence,
And an echo
touches where one least
expects it.

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  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    September 16, 2008

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    "And an echo
    touches where one least
    expects it" The last part is my favorite. The entire poem is well written though. Very deep I was in a trance with your words. Thank you for sharing. ~~Iridessa~~


  • Sprite silver member
    August 13, 2008

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    This is really quite beautifully said. "Where the twilight pursues a heart" is very nice indeed. I especially love the tone of this poem. It is so gentle. Fragile like a rosebud. ~ Joyce

  • Cwm
    August 9, 2008

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    Wwo the imagery in this piece well done, who needs College when you can write like this? Well done sir


  • Dmonik
    August 9, 2008

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    Beautiful.
    We find what we were looking for, often when we least expect it..
    You have a way with words, that keeps the reader drawn into them..
    Bravo

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