Red man....
Rage....
like the howl of the wolf
on the hunt...
after his prey,
I honor your heart
brave as it is,
To walk on this Earth,
Sad....
at the tears come falling
like the rain in the sky,
Because....
some have forgotten
to honor Mother Nature and
Father Sky,
But you....
remember
And teach your children
the old ways.
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Love it!
I've always had an affinity for Native American cultures, so this really appealed to me. And I like the format too...nice flow.
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Nice style
Cool. I like your format. What's it called? Did you make it up yourself?
Anyhow, I like how this incorporates with bad emotions. You can really hurt others with your thoughts and actions, and how you feel towards them. Anger, sadness. Both very smally but thoroughly described. I really like the picture of the wolf. Your poem truely goes with your picture and background.
Keep writing.
-LongPatrol
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Ah..its universal tone and wonderful linking of the life is remarkable one..I love it..well done..and thanks for sharing..
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Such respect given to one who respects. And so many preach a good game, but never follow their own rules. Perhaps we are all guilty of that at times...when I think on it.
This one makes a reader pause and think.
~Pamela 
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