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Lay With Me.....One Last Time

Look, You're leaving me tomorrow
Out on a ferry back to your hometown
And I will be left here in complete sorrow
While the pain in my chest brings me down
So please, for this one last night
Lay don with me
To let me know you will be back
To take me with you
So never leave my side
For this one, simple, golden, last, time

Have you ever had to let someone go?

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  • lovinsapphire
    August 13, 2008

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    well that 6th line *down that was the only spelling problem i loved it i felt the same way earlier this summer and still do i'll tell you about it if you want me to it was another great write