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Party The Night Away

This is your big day so let it all out
make sure everything is ready for your friends
watch a few movies with them before the party begins

Head to the club set up your sound system
lower the lights and get out the glow sticks
twirl them in the air without a care

Music blasting as you dance all night
lots of Soda and pizza for all
lights flashing with smoke machines

Enjoy yourself as your bob to the beat
a year older but still going strong
it is your big day so have fun




Author notes

I wanted to end the last line like the first I hope you enjoy this oh thanks for what you said on my poem I was going to read one of your poems and saw your contest so yeah I wanted to do this first oh and happy Bday Woodooloo
Written January 12th, 2004

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  • -Aquarius-
    January 12, 2004
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    lol, yay my first entry!! I thought no one would ever enter. This was a fun read. I hope my b-day is as fun, shit hopefully more fun but I'll take what I can get, ya know? Thanks for the entry Sector!! & of course, good luck!
    Crystal