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The Circle Is Open

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The circle is open
forever touching upon a world of vision,
Perhaps...
some may call it fantasy,
But it allows you to dream,
Speak to the faerie folk,
They show you wisdom in your life,
Without change
something sleeps inside us
forever forgotten,
Like a mystery never solved,
reach into your spirit
and let the child in you live again,
Seeking play and curiously
forever keeping you young.

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  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    June 4

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    Thank you for sharing!

    Yes this is what it is about. Thank you for sharing. You know what you are talking aout side. I felt as if I was there.
    ~~Shannon~~


  • AutoPilate
    August 8, 2008

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    What I love most about this piece is that that circle can be anything for anyone... we can take that metaphor as anything we personally feel we've imagined as closed to us simply is... open.

    Sometimes we need to be reminded of these things. More often than not, I should say. Thank you for reminding me.

    Another well-writ poem, good sir. You do with poetry exactly what should be done with it: inspire.

    - Giovanni


  • x Gemini x
    August 8, 2008
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    The only issue here is the mix of capitlization...there seems to be no set pattern, and none of the sentences are ended so...it jut jumped out at me.

    Nice work though.

    "Like a mystery never solved,
    reach into your spirit
    and let the child in you live again"
    was really inspiring