I've tried a thousand times,
maybe more, to put into words,
every feeling, every thought-
that I have for you-
how the simple thought of the look
in your eyes when you look at me,
can make me smile-
-or-
how the way your touch
can send shivers
up and down my spine,
how when I'm with you-
everything is right with the world-
But- try as I might,
every time I try to find
the right words,
they just can not be found-
there are no words
known to mankind,
that says all that,
so once again-
I sit here,
and I try,
but I failed,
failed horribly,
The only words
I know,
I love you
and that still is not
near enough.
A contest entry
- Tell someone you love them... by Margaret Denham.
1900 points, ended August 23, 2008, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything Your Heart Desires by Do You Feel.
550 points, ended December 27, 2008, 105 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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I love it. Thank you for entering.
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Lovely
Often the touch the look and the very glow of a womans skin and joy screams of the love she so feels for her man . She is full of life and all shall see this love between you without a word spoken .Lovely write
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I don't think you failed at all in getting across how you feel. Every word you wrote touched a chord within me and I know exactly what you meant.
Thank you for your entry and best wishes in the judging.
Love Margaret
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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I know exactly what you are saying and there are no words that can really explain love.
Love,
Amera♥
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Beauty~
Love this and I just finished my piece for this contest but had not posted and elated You entered also
The last two lines touch deep~
I Love You radiates too
Excellent as always
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Very sweet and loving Sis..sometimes it does seem a simple I love you isn't enough to convey just how we do feel about someone special. Good luck in the contest..
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