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I'm Afraid

My tounge
          thickens,

clogging my
          throat

and tugging my
          insides,

however remote.

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  • Felixthecat7
    October 16, 2008
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    Short but good


  • Unsigned gold member
    August 7, 2008
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    Quick and easy but with a lot of meaning..

    Thanks

    Simon