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Mine

Burning pain hides away in the fears
Endurance would pull all your tears
Loathing how one could watch a descending soul
Ongoing through this life for not but not for lack of control
Nothing would save me but my faith
Gaining confidence in fear, just to wait

Fear would consume a withering heart
On this the time of love ripping all apart
Ruining all ideals

Youth can’t be found but can repair
Only with time can all pass out of care
Underneath I will be found buried in dominance
Rising to this occasion would you have seen me even by chance?
Slipping away to the darkness somewhere my fear lies
Elusive is my elation, on this my heart flies
Loving all they where, forgotten who I was
For now I lay thinking in a gripping pause

Author notes

My name is cian and thats all im willing say about myself

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