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A Lonely Night







Sweet music plays,
giving hallucinations of shreaks,
curtains fall abruptly;


Who's peeking?










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  • Unsigned gold member
    August 7, 2008
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    Very nice...love the question at the end..


    S

  • mina nagi
    August 7, 2008

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    I don't believe in Ghosts but I find this very creepy.. a few lines ceratinly have sent cold chill down my spine... very effective...
    Good luck in the contest...

    mina