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To My Sister With Love

Some one to be there,
Alone in the world you feel,
Some one who can care,
Aches, one who, can heal,

Some one called as friend,
Enough is her smile to heal,
Some one closer than friend,
Essence of sooth one can feel,

Some one who trusts you,
Her trust makes you brother,
Some one who excites you,
Your love makes her a sister,

Some one more than friend,
Custodian of the secrets in you,
Some one upon whom you depend,
Cultivates the warmth in you,

Some one who cares in the world,
Whose reflection is hard to find
Some one just one in the world,
Whose alike one never can find.

*~*Aun Ali*~*
{Lead by Example}

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DEDICATED TO ALL MY SISTERS WITH LOVE.

Thanks to 'Ankita A' for giving a better look to this poem.

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  • TransparentOpacity
    October 28, 2008

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    SPLENDID

    VERY beautiful ... true every sister is very special ...
    I too cannot imagine my life without my own ....
    GR8 flow .. very natural !!!

    VERY WELL-PENNED !!!!


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    October 27, 2008

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    Aww thanks this means a great deal to me and it is such a beautiful piece of writing thanks for taking the time to pen it for us all


    • Aun Ali
      October 27, 2008
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      I am obliged by this comment dear sister, thank you for the words, and more than that thank you for being my sister so sweet.


  • Nermin Nazim
    September 13, 2008

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    always sweet and deep sensations

    just so beautiful in simple words and style that are not simple at all and hard to emulate as your feelings for everyone are unique and part of your beautiful soul my dear brother


  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    August 26, 2008

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    Thank you. So very kind and sweet words fill my heart with joy and happiness. So sorry I havn't been in touch


  • Gamool
    August 24, 2008

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    this is soooo sweet, and im sry i havnt been in touch lately,, never had time,, anyhows wish u the best XXX


  • Vernal Bloom
    August 19, 2008
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    Thank you! This is so kind of you


  • SabaSophiya
    August 9, 2008
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    Dear brother,

    Thank you so much for dedicating these beautiful words to me.

    I deeply appreciate the colors of this heartfelt painting you have painted with words.

    I have no words to describe my appreciation. Thank you once again.

    Zillions of duas,
    Best Bajjo.


  • KillerRain
    August 9, 2008
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    poetic rights to ur sister. love it. KillerRain

    • Aun Ali
      August 14, 2008
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      My dear, this poem is meant for you too, aren't you my sister???

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