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All Alone




Silent-

Memories-

Shattered-

Alone-

Growing colder
day by day

Intensified

All Alone



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Prompt Fear....

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 1, 2008
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    Good write here

    I believe I have been there and done that and I dont want to ever go back


  • penman gold member
    August 25, 2008
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    Excellent

    Such a great creation for the them. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.

  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 22, 2008

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    Oh this is sad indeed

    When one loses at a later age they fel nothing in life is left yet as of the first day you still feel love and know life is just begining again if you so want it to be


  • Amera gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    Ah! You don't write too many dark poems but when you do, you really show the emotion. Bravo!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Desire gold member
    August 7, 2008

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    Wow~

    Ooooooooooooooh Fear can manifest itself in many forms-
    Oy!!!
    All Alone it sure can make one feel

    Love this!!
    Excellent take on the prompt~
    You go on Beautiful!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Unsigned gold member
    August 7, 2008
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    Oh how very sad..


    Great write


    Simon

  • Shadow Darkstar
    August 7, 2008

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    I don't like being alone!
    But the poem was good. -Nods her head yes-
    Short, to the point. Good take on the prompt.


  • Star Shine
    August 7, 2008
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    Good response to a prompt of fear, alone-ness is scary, especially if we have been with loved ones.

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