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A Broken Promise

I breathe a sigh
Made inaudible by the wind
A tear leaves my eye
Hidden by the falling rain

The nights are long
And the days drag on without meaning
I try to be strong
But I don't know if I can continue to stand alone

If I've learned one thing
It's to not make promises lightly
Your broken words in my head ring
"I will never leave you"; a lie

Don't get me wrong
I don't blame you for what you couldn't help
But the fact remains that you're gone
And I don't believe in destiny anymore

I breathe another sigh
And wish it were my last
So I could be by your side
The only place I've ever belonged

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  • GypsyBorn
    August 7, 2008
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    nice, i totally felt the pain that the poems shows