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The Moon

Look at the Moon
Sitting in a realm of stars
Looking peaceful
Glistening in the starlight

Looking down on us
Reminding us that we are not alone
Shining through the night
Lighting the way through the night

A ball of light
Bringing light to the dark world
Chasing the darkness away
Leaving us with peace and calmness

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  • sol-luna
    December 8, 2008
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    the very same reason why i adore the moon.

    this is a nice write.


  • drakostheron
    August 8, 2008
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    nice work good imagery and light metaphor. oh and line 7 I think you mean through not throw