Look at the Moon
Sitting in a realm of stars
Looking peaceful
Glistening in the starlight
Looking down on us
Reminding us that we are not alone
Shining through the night
Lighting the way through the night
A ball of light
Bringing light to the dark world
Chasing the darkness away
Leaving us with peace and calmness
Author notes
L e x i c a t s
A contest entry
- Paint your picture in my mind_contest part one of four by drakostheron.
950 points, ended October 1, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - short, colorful, to the point by Avani.
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Comments
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the very same reason why i adore the moon.
this is a nice write.


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nice work good imagery and light metaphor. oh and line 7 I think you mean through not throw


