Who extinguished the stars?
Who obscured the moon?
Will night never end?
A contest entry
- Quickie ~ come one come 12 by Unsigned.
300 points, ended August 7, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Volumes in three sweet lines...
Very awe inspiring in such a short time. Like a star exploding millions of miles away.
wolf
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wow... this was short but just wow. i guess theres just things in life we will never know.
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This is just wild.
I wrote a piece called...What Dreams Bring The Night...
But you trumped me here,
You said it with such grace ...and theres that question again...
Love it!
Blessings lass,
LOWELL
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Interesting set of questions, whether this be an astromical phenomena or an emotional problem good food for thought.
Dennis
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I like the deep simlicity of this poem.
I think it is good to stop and ask where the darkness comes from in our lives (certainly not from God, IMHO)
a good reminder of the need to seek the Light.
Wade
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So right! Always seek the light.
I once saw a sign that read something like, "If I did not love the stars so, I would fear the night." As long as we can see some light, there is hope.
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Will night never end?
how many times have I layed awake asking that one? loved this. -
No hopefully it wont
Great questioning and a powerful write
Simon
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Oh, yes.
The eclipse that is, indeed, total.
Good stuff.
Good luck in the contest.
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Nicely done... dark (no pun intended
) and taps at the fear we all have... Best of luck...
Ken
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