Luminosity I know radiated off my being,
as you bore your eyes unto my form
unclading me within your glances.
Breathing deep the action lifted my bust,
I watched you lick your lips in primal hunger.
This made my heart beat and warmth spread.
Blushes reach my bosom as lips leave there print.
Shy eyes are casted down so the conflagration wont be seen.
This is what you do to me within a smile.
Impassion Stirs and convulse through my body.
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Oooooo My
Such a sweet apple pie, with a smile and a sigh.
Very Good
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Oh boy, the mood I'm in
Great visuals you have created here within a smile, such passion to warm the heart. You truly are awesome and once again show great talent.
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Hot and tasty, apple pies are now my favourite
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...so hot
"shy eyes are casted down..." Such sweet vulgarity!
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Miss your comments. Must get on with my new story. I think you would love it.
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I like the three line stanza of this poem That is a good format so keep with it!!!
Some nice visuals here dear Well done!
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Thank you so much.
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Nice..
Your first line, " Luminosity I know radiated off my being" killed it! wow that's a hot phrase, good job all around miss thanmg!
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yep, goota watch out for those 'smiles'. They'll warm you in more than one way
Joe
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radiating....
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I love it!! Great job
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I must remember to keep smiling!!!!!!
Great stuff
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