Man has many basic needs
to see him on his way,
plant ideas and sow the seeds
to help him everyday.
Fill a heart with raging fire
banish all despair,
instil hope and feed desire,
live life without a care.
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie 40 words by Riftkin.
625 points, ended August 7, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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alot of truths in this one.good write
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Big congrats on the Bronze-
Hilly xxx
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To banish all despair
would be wonderful
and Hope is always there
Riftkin
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Hope is a wonderful thing. May we all have enough of it to get by! Excellent poem.
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I seem to be reading poems on hope today!! Maybe someone is trying to tell me something? lol
Beautifully put Sue!! A heart filled with raging fire sounds like a mighty fine thing to me!
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Nice job. I hope people who read this are inspired to banish their despair. Best of luck in the contest.
Mike
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Boffo!
good look with that banishment of despair thing ... seems to be a lot of it these days ...
Thanks for this, Sue, and good luck in the contest.
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Very up beat and positive.
I like this very much.
Don
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