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Without A Care

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Man has many basic needs
to see him on his way,
plant ideas and sow the seeds
to help him everyday.



Fill a heart with raging fire
banish all despair,
instil hope and feed desire,
live life without a care.

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Sparow
    August 15, 2008
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    alot of truths in this one.good write


  • moonbumps silver member
    August 8, 2008
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    Big congrats on the Bronze-
    Hilly xxx


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 7, 2008
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    To banish all despair
    would be wonderful

    and Hope is always there

    Riftkin


  • arafura gold member
    August 7, 2008
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    Hope is a wonderful thing. May we all have enough of it to get by! Excellent poem.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    August 7, 2008

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    I seem to be reading poems on hope today!! Maybe someone is trying to tell me something? lol

    Beautifully put Sue!! A heart filled with raging fire sounds like a mighty fine thing to me!


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    August 7, 2008

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    Nice job. I hope people who read this are inspired to banish their despair. Best of luck in the contest.

    Mike


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    August 7, 2008

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    Boffo!

    good look with that banishment of despair thing ... seems to be a lot of it these days ...

    Thanks for this, Sue, and good luck in the contest.


  • Maxboy gold member
    August 7, 2008

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    Very up beat and positive.

    I like this very much.

    Don

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