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It sets in once again as im left cold alone,
this empty feeling, a place i know so well,
the silence echo's out around me in a never ending tone,
then i see that flicker of movement, im captured by its spell,
its a glimmer of hope that i cant seem to grasp,
i walk towards another door, hoping to find its warmth,
but once again cold stares of disgust are all i get in return.
its a never ending cycle, i cant seem to break free,
but i realize that this is my life, it seems it was destined to be.
Author notes
well i like the poem but i have to admit my rhyme scheme is kinda off. i hope you still liked it though.
A contest entry
- What Comes Next? by XxXEmoRainDropsXxX.
775 points, ended August 22, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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'but once again cold stares of disgust are all i get in return' was an excellent line.
Great poem. -
wow! after rereading this, i love this! it is very good! i love it! good job!
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oh, never mind! sorry! i see that you already have it!! but this was a very good piece! and thank you for entering!!
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if u want to have a chance of winning this, please put what i told you to put in the notes section, or i will have to disqualify you.
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