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Can I?

Can I dive in
And ride your current
To my Avalon?
Baptize you
with my tongue
til I am dripping with desire;
Then, drink from you
Until I am filled
And
Overflow?

Can I get on my knees
and worship there
at your feet
with tender kisses
until my own liberation
And
every part of me
Is yours
And
your "will" becomes mine?


Can I love you
With a love
Absolute and righteous,
Born at
your conception
and held
until your reveal
A love
Capable of emancipation
only by you?

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  • hotchocolate gold member
    August 7, 2008

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    This is good I like this!

    Baptize you
    with my tongue
    til I am dripping with desire;
    Then, drink from you
    Until I am filled
    And
    Overflow?