Why do you just stand there?
Why don't you stop me?
Is it wrong to show me,
to tell me how you really feel?
Chorus:
Don't you know-
You're the one that I dream of-
You're the one that sets my mind
a-whirl-
You're the one that was made for me.
Ah, come on, show me that
I'm not wrong-
I didn't give you my heart for
nothing at all.
I believe in you, you and me
we got it all-
we are two hearts that belong together-
Chorus:
Don't you know-
You're the one that I dream of-
You're the one that sets my mind
a-whirl-
You're the one that was made for me.
If you'll just tell me-
not to go,
you'll see-
I'm gonna be the one
that stands here-
right here beside you-
in everything you do-
Chorus:
Don't you know-
You're the one that I dream of-
You're the one that sets my mind
a-whirl-
You're the one that was made for me.
So come on and tell me
what your heart says,
that you know we were meant to be.
Chorus:
Don't you know-
You're the one that I dream of-
You're the one that sets my mind
a-whirl-
You're the one that was made for me.
(made for me you and you alone,
made for me)
Please tell me what you think
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Very good
As we invision the dreams we so live let us touch the hearts of others to help them see love is possible indeed
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As pennman said, this is music for the soul and it's delightful.
Love,
Amera♥
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Excellent
Oh my true music for the soul. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Wow~
Now this is one unique piece and You are so good at lyrics- I try to do them
Oy!!
Scary
Powerful Voice here Beautiful!!!
Woooooooooooooot-
So more please...
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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This is really sweet and heartfelt. I liked the flow to it. Just a few things:
"Why don't you stom me?" in this line I am not sure what you meant storm, stomp? is stom a word that I just don't know of?
"You're the one that was made for me." I think this line would sound better if it were just 'You're the one made for me' or 'You're the one for me' that was just doesn't seem to sound right
"I didn't you my heart for
nothing at all." I think maybe you meant I didn't (give)?you my heart.
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very nice!! mind taking a look at mine?
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That was a happy read! I needed that
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Very pretty lyrics! Something I cannot write. But you have done an excellent job!!
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