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A sky filled with beautiful birds,

and white clouds


a sky filled with life


a life filled

with beautiful sky.


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  • Eric Marsh
    August 23

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    this is quite beautiful, enchanting, relaxing, comforting...but no title ? if it were mine i would call it: Take My Hand.
    keep well and take care


  • LittleMoon silver member
    July 2
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    Simple and very lovely. Sheila

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    August 7, 2008

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    I do like this I wish at times I could just fly into the sky and forget everything that has been in my life thanks for sharing nice write


  • AnanCat
    August 7, 2008
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    So spiritual..liked"a sky filled with life"cause that is so true.The sky is full with life,full with hope and full with a happy angelic smile when it's blue..
    Maybe you have to write some more lines cause when I read it I felt like the poem didn't finish yet and need more to read and get enough.
    I suggest a title:The sky is alive.Don't know if it's nice
    Anan.

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