Memories of love spilt blood,
never seem to fade away.
They come at times in pouring floods,
seep into cracks and always stay.
Remembering your transformation,
continuosly haunts my dreams.
Sick thoughts filled with adoration,
echoing with painful screams.
Recall your face so pale and flawless,
a demon in an angels face.
Live your life so free and lawless,
drag me along at your pace.
But I was stronger than you knew,
I walked away without a glance.
With love, you didn't have a clue,
I saw that hole; I took my chance.
Every day as hard as stone,
Each footstep held down with lead.
The road on how to be alone,
was one I didn't want to tread.
I continued on; I made it through.
I'd hoped these feelings wouldn't last.
My slate is clean; I'll start anew,
And lock the door unto my past.
Author notes
When I read the title I had to enter this contest, because no matter how many people I meet there's always a few who have had to go through something similair;. I was with someone who loved hurting me and played with my head and emotions so bad that I was in love with him for so long after; if it hadn't been for a person in my life to help me see reality I'd probably still be in love with him. Hes in jail now on a completely different charge than what happened with me and him, and he'd due out in a year or maybe less if hes been good in there. Every night I have nightmares and worry about whats going to happen when he gets out.
Don't fret. Don't worry. Whatever happens your strong enought to hold out against it and if your boyfriend really cares about you he'll help you through this.
Good luck to you!
-SilentMoonlight
A contest entry
- Closing The Door To Your Past by Viyanna Rosemarie.
1233 points, ended September 21, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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Sounds like you made a good decision in regard to this guy. Your poem is heartfelt and inspiring to others. God bless.
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I thought the opening line to this piece was really incredible. It was so moving and twisted. I love have it gave my heart this gnarled feeling.
I like how this piece started out mournful. It had the air of hopelessness that seemed consuming. But I like how slowly it started to get better and brighter. The ending had a hopeful tint to it which I liked because it wasn't overly done. You made it small but noticeable.
Sweetpea if a boy ever treats you this way ever again I will direct him into the ground with a broken face.
all my love
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I really like this. It's very sad, but very well written. I'm not a fan of rhyme, but you've done an excellent job with this. :]
"Every day as hard as stone,
Each footstep held down with lead.
The road on how to be alone,
was one I didn't want to tread."
Best part of the poem. Wonderful stanza. Anyone experiencing heartbreak can relate to this.
Wonderful job. :]
-Lily♥
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Excellent Write!!!!!
Oh this was an amazing write. I am so glad you got away from that situation. It is hard to break free sometimes but with faith anything is possible. Hugs and Smiles for you. You tske care.
God Bless You,
love Sandy
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Thank You
Why thank you for the awesome comment
When I was writing this I kinda started realizing there really are some things that people just can't get over.
Thanks again!
-Jordanne
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