Look into my eyes,
Tell me what you see.
This girl filled with such emotion,
Yet all that she is, is lonely.
So empty & frail,
She wants to be loved,
She wants to go on adventures,
See so many countries,
But yet..all she is, is lonely.
Crying out are her eyes,
Crying "please help me",
For all she wants is to be is that princess,
Something where theres a happy ending,
She just wants to be her..
And not who people want her to be.
She cries lonely tears,
As she says "I just want to be me"
She wants to be so free.
Fly away from the place,
Be you, and enjoy life.
Never let people rule you.
Copyright: Karlie67 August 2008
Author notes
Option 1 -Missa
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt....... by Angelflower.
600 points, ended August 10, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Options, options, and MORE OPTIONS!!! by Missa.
425 points, ended September 15, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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The eyes windows to the soul. Pools to the true inner spirit in all its glory...or pain. You've captured this well.
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Totally agree with your statement there & thank you for your encouragement it means a lot to me, seeing I don't feel good at writing
Thank you again
Karlie
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wow, how many girls in particular are thinking this. It's a word game sometimes, but you describe this avidly, and I would say, tears only prolong the length of time waiting, smile, and you'll be surpirsed what comes your way. Lovely work.
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Aww, wow
thanks for your amazing comment it made me smile! I also fully agree with your statement too!
Thank you so much!
Karlie
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wow! great! you choose option 1 but it could have fit in other options too. awsome. its kinda like my "I am Me" and "Happily Never After" put together along with your description of yourself.
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Thanks for your lovely comment
I'll be sure to check out the poems of yours!
I wasn't actually sure what option to put it in so I chose that cause it's how I feel about my self.
Glad you like it!
Karlie
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ok, you need to add the option. until then, you will not be in the finalist (when you add it you will be) and if it is not there by the closing day, you have no chance of winning.
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hey karlie I love the way that you have written this poem and the picture really does give it that edge!! keep up the good writing :-) you really let out some emotion there
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Awww thank you so much, your comment really means alot to me, thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm glad you liked it! :-D
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You let it all out here, because you needed to. some day you will be free
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Very meaningful and moving Karlie!
You have penned some very important messages here, and a very thought provoking write too.
There is an air of longing and also mystery here, you have created a pendulum effect ambiance which is very unique.
Fantastic work and love the poetic graphics, you have amazing talent for committing to poetry, deep feelings and emotions which bring your work alive, that is a very rare talent.
Write on, love it, bravo, very very well done indeed, this is fantastic!
Poetic Love & Hugs,
Mum
(Kazytc)
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i like this poem. great job ^^
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This was a very emotional write.. you really did a wonderful job.. It was intense and very much.. relatable.. Thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck.
Angel
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A sad and emotional write... although I get a great sense of you in this it's beautifully written. Well done and best of luck...
Ken
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Yes I guess in a way, it kind of is me, although I never wrote it about me hehe. Thanks you for your lovely comment it made me smile.
Karlie xx
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nice. I like your take on the prompt. The last few lines are a great ending for me. Best of luck in the contest.
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