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A song in my heart

For breaking the silence
From the demons of pain
To breathe in peace
to survive and sustain
I keep a song in my heart
And let it spill through my lips

For those in despair and
For those hurt and blamed
Not just for myself
But for others too
I keep a song in my heart
And let it spill

Each word dances through my lips
And sways from my heart to another
Spreading a piece of my heart
Contagiously,
like a random beautiful Infection,
Touching lives,
Spreading warmth,
hope and calmness through
a divine feeling
From the nerves to blood
And the world transforms into a happy place
As i keep a song in my heart
And let it spill through my worthy lips.

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poetic-enigma21, Amaranthine Lover
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  • epitome
    August 18

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    Thanks for entering!

    Strong, vivid descriptions here, and I loved the repetition of the word 'lips'. You have a defiance running through this that you almost don't pick up on, but I think it's in the tone and pace Brilliant write!

    Good luck;


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    January 9
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    I think you did well in expressing yourself here!


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    December 28, 2008

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    suggestion

    Please put author's name and Amaranthine Lover in the author's notes so that I know who you are and that you read my rules, thank you. I see anything not pertaining to my guidelines, I WILL DQ.

  • know one
    August 11, 2008
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    nice

    great flow and inspirational theam,thanks for entering


  • xrain dancerx
    August 8, 2008

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    o wow! awesome poem. "As i keep a song in my heart
    And let it spill through my worthy lips." my fav lines. thanx for entering and awesome job.
    *hugs* tay..

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