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a fresh breeze





a fresh breeze
whispers through the corn
deaf ears






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  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    August 15, 2008

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    "a fresh breeze
    whispers through the corn
    deaf ears"

    Oh! That's clever!
    I wouldn't have thought of that At first I didn't get it at first... but lol I do now

    Good luck with your entry!
    Claire x


  • azure85 gold member
    August 11, 2008

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    a fresh breeze
    whispers through the corn
    deaf ears

    A very good pun in your AHA moment, you can feel the breeze through the field. Thank you so much!