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[ The love inside.... is something extraordinary ]

        The love inside.... is something extraordinary
              lovers are like a memory
                  How is this life?
         

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  • MortalPhoenix
    August 7, 2008
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    The only problem I see is that you have two ideas here (the first two lines). I think it could have been much stronger if you expanded on one of those, instead of pushing two ideas into very few words. Nonetheless, this is very nice.
    Thanks for entering my contest and good luck!