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What am i?

I am the answer no one knows
the question on everyones mind
what is not seen but heard
i lay between rationalism and frame of mind
a genius in my own time
i have been since the begining and will be until the end
what am i?
a riddle 

A contest entry

contemplation for the minds ease

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  • Klayer
    August 8, 2008

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    thats cool. I like most of your poems as they all seem to contain a spark of life and its well good


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    August 7, 2008

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    I have to agree with the previous commenter. Ther first three lines are incredible. I have to ask you to put the quote that inspired you in your authors notes.

    Would you consider answering the riddle there too?


  • Lexie
    August 7, 2008
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    love love love it

    i like this one part, at the beggining

    I am the answer no one knows
    the question on everyones mind
    what is not seen but heard


    it makes me want more, it made me so curious. i love getting those feeling while reading. makes me smile. another great poem.


  • AloneForever-
    August 7, 2008

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    I ab-so-lute-ly love this..
    I can't pick out a favourite part cause I loved the Whole thing..
    As i read each line I wanted to read more(if you get what i mean)
    It ended just write
    AMAZING
    Gd Luck in the contest