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woodpeckers hammer



woodpeckers hammer
stubborn oak and fragile ears―― 
what asperity!


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  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    August 15, 2008

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    "Asperity"

    that's a new word for me ^^
    I love woodpeckers. We don't have them down here in tassie but they always look rather cool in pictures

    Good luck with your entry!
    Claire x


  • azure85 gold member
    August 8, 2008

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    woodpeckers hammer
    stubborn oak and fragile ears――
    what asperity!

    Very nice haiku about nature. The use of sound is very good, and your AHA is great. Thank you so much.