Insanity is my only escape
From a world chosen by fate
To be swallowed by haters and fakes
While the lands bein raped
And the rich get their cake
My state of mind is my enemy of state
Cuz I am no longer blind to the facts that I find
Lyin in plain sight
They pretendin they dont see it
Repulsed by they own bullshit but still they gon eat it
America land of the free but freedom dont come freely
To be taken by the system is easy
But its harder to abandon it and leave it
So challenge it and see that
Friends become enemies and enemies are still enemies
And in the end even the innocent is no longer innocent
In a world where the poor and lazy will ide
But the rich and lazy survive
FUCK THE SYSTEM!!!!!
jus keep it real
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Man this is good. I like line where you talked about the land being raped. If you were to perform this....man, I can't even tell you how banana's it would be. Especially at the end, that last line.....man. I wanna be there for this performance.
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wow
that really strong
powerful words
you feel alot of hate in the words
really strong hate and anger!!
great job! -
this is good.
i enjoyed reading this. it would sound so awesome if you could get it put to music and rapped it. the idea just blew me away.
````Oh, sorry to bather you about something like this, but (and this is just my oppinion) i think line 16 would sound better And in the end even the innocent are no longer innocent. sorry. i'm a grammar nazi. and there's a typo in line 17. it's nothing personal, it just destracts from the effect of the piece.
~~~~thanks for writing an amazing piece.
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