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turning over









turning over
between dreams
a haiku moment








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  • carole21
    August 23, 2008

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    well done . . liked "between dreams" and "a haiku moment" . . congrats on the trophy . . a nice non-traditional haiku


  • Harrisham Minhas
    August 23, 2008
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    This is poignant.
    Congrats on the Gold.


  • Noir mariposa...x
    August 15, 2008

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    Awww very pretty. I'm not the best at haiku, but I can tell good ones


    Very nicely penned; good luck with your entry!
    Claire x


  • azure85 gold member
    August 7, 2008

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    turning over
    between dreams
    a haiku moment

    This is really cool, and how those haiku sometimes just pop into our minds, even while asleep! Thank you so much!


  • between slices
    August 7, 2008

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    ooh, and there's a moment simply captured.
    i love the movement within this - the shift of the body, the shift of the dream scene, and even a subconscious interference.
    ah.. haiku dreams.


  • daviscth silver member
    August 7, 2008

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    I don't know the first thing about haiku but I really liked this. The imagery is awesome for just a few words. Best wishes in the contest.

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