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Touch

Serenity,
borne by liquid gold
eternity speaks as we hold,
touch, feel, extend, to bold
lust, feelings sink and rise,
held in globe of surmise
making fast the ties
of elemental love
that will never move,
it is our behove,
let it soothe,
floating in orange glow
we shall always show
as we grow
in peace.

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  • Angel Felice Seals
    August 7, 2008
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    I Really loved this

    This was really good so graceful so much emotions
    your flow was fabulous the passion I could feel your soul in this the rhyme was awesome always keep it flowing and never let the ink run dry I got such enjoyment out of reading this Thanks for entering my contest such meaning behind your words