And I never promised you
I’d be yours forever
But what I always vowed
Was I was yours then, and I am now
I remember all the late night long phone calls
And oh the ways you made me laugh
The texts you used to send
And I could never resist replying to
I know right now
We’re on different paths
I don’t know where it leaves us
Or me
I wanted you to be mine
Like you used to be
Smile and laugh
And let me know where you are.
Because….I love you.
Author notes
I knew we were never perfect and never would be, but I could never predict that after 11months with someone as sweet as you I'd come out with a broken heart. I trusted you.
A contest entry
- Give Me Something Sad by LittleDecoy.
900 points, ended August 31, 2008, 82 entries
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Comments
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im so sorry you ended up getting your heart broken. i know how hard it can be. this is a great poem. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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what an amazingly emotional piece.
it gave me an empty feeling in my gut as i ready it.
awesome write. =)
thanks for entering & good luck -
Loved It
awwww, this is an absolutely wonderful poem and it sounds like what i was trying to explain to an ex boyfriend at one time. we was never really perfect together and we never would have been.
I remember all the late night long phone calls
And oh the ways you made me laugh
The texts you used to send
And I could never resist replying to
i love that part because i can so realte to that one piece at the moment with my great boyfriend steven charles. but i love your poem.
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