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False

Speacial circumstances
these occasioans
where my heart
doesn't apply
these times
where my feelings
can get old
and dry

with you I live
in these places
to you I give
different faces

I never wanted
something that traces
back to me

Violently
I feel the ecstacy
of having someone like you
standing next to me
I'm not unsure
of how
pure I am
you are unsure
of this
royal scam

with you I live
in these places
to you I give
different faces

I never wanted
something that traces
back to me

Potential dusk
after each dawn
a gentle musk
a spiteful yawn
a scream of lust
you're holding on
I must confus
you are so wrong

with you I live
in these places
to you I give
different faces

I never wanted
something that traces
back to you

you never knew
how much I lied
to you
decieved
your broken heart
I retrieved
just to have someone
standing next to me
just to once more
feel that ecstacy

with you I live
in these places
to you I give
different faces

I never wanted
anything that traces
to what I knew
to me or you

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  • Emm Jayy
    October 24, 2008

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    Wow. This was amazing... you're a great writer.

    My favorite part was this:
    Potential dusk
    after each dawn
    a gentle musk
    a spiteful yawn
    a scream of lust
    you're holding on

    Simply because... it flowed so perfectly. I loved it.

    Keep up the good work.
    -Mj