my people,
my heart bleeds for you,
my children,
my love is for you,
beloved,
i have always adored you,
my eye is on you
from fall of night,
til first light of morning.
i watch you go through each new day,
and look always for blessings to send your way,
i yearn to fill your heart each day,
and try to show my love in a new way..
i wait to see you wake each day,
waititng for a chance to say,
"i love you, my child, and i'm with you today"
i paint rainbows in the sky,
and speak the mountains tall,
yet i spend each day longing,
to just once hear you call!!
i caress your face with sunlight,
and whisper in your ear,
my child, i would do ANYTHING
just to show you that i'm near!
and still you choose to walk away,
and i plead and beg for you to stay,
you answer my love by turning away,
my heart is broken, but thats ok,
you'll still wake tomorrow and hear me say,
"i love you my child,
do you hear me today?"
A contest entry
- Your Best Pre-Written Rhyme by piccola.
800 points, ended August 15, 2008, 90 entries
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Comments
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This is a great poem.
Keep up the great writing.
Thanks for entering my contest.
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Greatest of all love
"i caress your face with sunlight,
and whisper in your ear,
my child, i would do ANYTHING
just to show you that i'm near!"
Thanks for your entry
Robert
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I really like the ending. The last stanza I feel is weak in that you use the word away to rhyme with itself. Never a good idea in my thinking. Thank you for the entry.
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