Scarlet droplets of sin sated
milky thigh
in ecstasy bleeding she rode
lustful high
wanton screams piercing rubescent
night sky
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Brilliant
I love this. I love this a lot. This is short, yet it is powerful it is erotic and it is deep and wanton. Wonderful writing here from a very very talented writer.
See you within the darkness
of my mind...Sugar.
Dark Love
Wayne Leon
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You betchya baby..see ya there.
Thank you sweetie..always a pleasure to have you read and comment
I appreciate your constant support.
Dark Love
Chelle xxx
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damn ga you wrote this so dark and nice i never thought a dark read could read so great nice job
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Whoa!
Sis, that was hot! Short & to the point. Good one.
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FITS THE PICTURE TO A 'T', BABY!
A short piece that says it all without a wasted word. Thanks SO MUCH for sharing with me - as always, Sugar!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
Who have you been learning how to rhyme from - as the flow and the rhymes in this were right on, Baby?
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Sug what can I say very HOT and erotic and dark...excellent write in a few words.
Emma
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We had a thunder storm and the pC crashed missed the dead line. I thought I would post it anyway..Glad you enjoyed it.
~sugar~
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wow damn sug this was good dear very dark erotic and delicious okay i enjoyed everysingle thing okay good luck in the contest
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Thanks sis always a pleasure to have you read
~sugar~
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