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A Broken Doll

A broken doll
Sitting on the shelf
Forgotten by all
Even herself

Incomplete
And falling apart
With broken limbs
And a broken heart

She felt love
Not long ago
But was it love
She didn’t know

Now she sits
And watches him
His perfect eyes
And perfect grin

A tear falls down
So much pain
She’ll never be his
Ever again

A broken doll
Sitting on the shelf
Forgotten by all
Even herself

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Just a poem.

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  • Peccavi
    April 6

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    The broken dolls heart is never broken just stab wounded.

    You're great at poems, I don't see why you put yourself down about them... It puts out a sad sort of feeling.... Try writing a really happy poem!\

    Well done! I loved it and thats what happens to all kids toys. They get them, they loved them and then they ditch them and move on.

    Sounds kind of like boyfriends hey! lol, I hope you're not the rag doll....

    Were here for you always and forever baby girl.

    Xoxo Serebear Ashiteru!
    Keep happy, it's a sin if your not!!!


  • travellingsoldier
    August 7, 2008

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    Tear (Literately) :'(

    I cried. Damn, thats what i want to be able to do, make someone cry. lol. Sorry. Anyway

    I love it sarah. I know what you are talking about. Exactly waht you are talking about. It sucks so much