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Affair in Death

Two souls, dancing in the mist,
Making love for eternity,
together they never will be,
for death is the end of all life,
so they stay, lovers playing in mist.
This is the end of their story.

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    August 7, 2008

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    Aww.. that's so sad.. but also in a way nice! That they are together! A unique take.. thanks so much!