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Sunset Mire

Sun peeking through the glade,
Water's reflection,
Golden sun bring joy into my life.
Beautiful.

A contest entry

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  • Desire gold member
    August 11, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Sunset Mire
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ while taking in Your words: Sun peeking through the glade...- was getting reference to tap water- au natural but also reference to pollution- unfiltered- I'm being shown a faucet and liquid dripping from it- but in slowwwwwwww motion- and a crash when it hits the sinks bottom- and being shown a gong- being hit Whether metaphor or symbolism
    Hopefully this makes some sense~
    Excellent take on the prompt ~
    Magnificent images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~